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Old 08-21-04, 05:25 PM   #28
C-Explicit
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Yo im givin it to auto here.. all this shit was mad stretched on both sides..

Auto had some good wordplay.. and punches were pretty good.. nice multis as well.. Overall your verse would have been rated an 8/10 because it was stretched, though the flow was pretty good, and the punches hit well.

Jono.. your flow was alright.. i wasnt feeling the opener.. cause ILLMATIC and AUTOMATIC arent really good words to use to rhyme.. it disrupts your flow.. Your wordplay was kinda basic.. but your line..

As Raps "Book" n "Clock" on your Block, take my spit n "Learn" n "Watch..'

Should have reversed book n clock.. because the line is Watch and learn.. which leads to a forced rhyme in the next line.. overall i would give your verse a 7/10 cause u had some forced rhymes n shyt...

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