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Old 08-21-04, 06:16 PM   #9
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Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

chose winners verse.....

shit i aint got time da wait!,ya lil thug image i find it fake...
.........but dogg how ya ryhmin great???........
dem shits like da "front of a gay club" nun of ya "lines is str8"
nice punch....good wordplay 8/10
i neva show signs of break,so come on fag try ya fate.....
pl's a lye ya str8!..even if i was dissin myself dis guy a hate
just 5 but you gotta use more "bar's" than "shyne's estate"
good punch....kinda stretched 7/10
if dis fagget nigga talk about killin ppl dont believe he do.....
his girl give head & like his "initial's" she drink "pee-pee-2".....
aight punch....could of made it hit harder 6/10
dont worry bout marv b...cuzz u win hardley eva since RB!...
u was weak n slow nobody "peeps ya flow" like a "fog sea"....
decent punch....nothing to special 5/10
i guess on my dick cuzz my flow n bar's movin me da ranks...
shows? only "back stage" u gon b is "commiunity complaints" ..
OK closer....you should always try to make your closer complex 6/10

v/marvolous

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143293
return the favor^^^thnx.