Voted For: RymheReaper
rhyme reaper took this battle bcuz his structure was on point and he had the best punch in the whole battle>(Ill sever ya mandable my jaws spit fire like roman candles/
yur chances of winning are so remote they turn tv channles)
im not gonna say to take off the lil slashes at the end cuz i think those help but erebody else on here says its "newbish" so i guess those have to go but u had better vocab n and ight attempt at multies Big bonks verse was pretty wack it was real basic n the structure was reall lackin just work on that n elevate ur vocab
holla at me
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