Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ
Drastic wins this battle barely only bcuz of vocab. The strucutre was pretty stretched and all those explanations within the spit really fucks of the flow of ya rhymes and the connnections were kind of stretched put ur explanations at the end if u have to but u had some good punches worked in there tho. simplify some of ur punches so there easier to read or chop them down or somethin n u'll b str8
upfront had a good spit too but while drastic was too complicated up front was too simple his structure was good and punches were ok but vocab was pretty simple so just up on that
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