Voted For: Sonofisis#1

Sonofisis#1:

opening lines(1-4) were decent,had some comedy...
after that your rhymes just died.

comments:your wordplay was alright,structure was lacking here. your flow was decent, punches were good in beggining and washed up towards the end.Nice opener, was your best line. Closure was not good, only thing you need to work on is the consistancy of a good verse.

vote:Sonofisis#1

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quote your own damn lyrics...