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Old 08-22-04, 12:14 AM   #30
~Sonofisis~
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Voted For: intensify effect

Intensify effect barley took this one cuz.. Jokah had way better structure than you and his flow was also on point, it sounded better actually than your verse.. yet, the content of your verse gave your the win, the wordplay, the punchlines, etc.. your opener was tight, but the line was stretched, you see what i mean? but your punchlines hit harder than his overall, rhymes were on point to give for a more entertaining verse...

return the favor with an honest drop in this one cuz..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143655
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