It was a nice callob.
The story was sort of bland.
And it was all worded rather poorly.
The lyrics werent really interesting, for example.
There was no multies, and it only the end of the line rhymed.
Thats not good, Verb attempted to have multis, but it just didnt work out, because of 1, he shouldnt have had his verse centered.
kids was doing that a year ago.
dont do that.
and 2, his multis were too simple.
It was expected to rhyme, yet, it was also expected to be better.
I feel Fiya came better.
like I said earlier, nice collab, but, thats the only thing positive abou this peice.
I'll give it a 5/10.
pZ

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R.I.P. Bodie