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Old 08-22-04, 07:52 AM   #22
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Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

DAmn Maku... ya got a lot better since I last saw you in our battle!

ya killed it with the wordplay... i still couldn't get ya flow down but it looked consistent throughout...

ya team need reality//
so wit ease i'll have Soulles sleepin with fishes,
.....like marine bestiality//
Practice from virginia snipings, gave me my aim//
but my spirit consumptional techniques, gave you ya name//

^^^ easily the best lines of the battle

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ya style was pretty regular... no ooomph to it at all...punches didn't hit hard enough.. you concentrated too much on his sig... that won't get you a win... one or two lines max on the sig woulda been cool if ya followed up with more potent material...no real wordplay or vocab... multi's woulda helped...maybe some metas... verse was too simple
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