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Old 08-22-04, 12:27 PM   #11
Premanition
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I’ma leave the scene .. using ur face to hit the road ..
Coz ur a bow to be killed .. like death by the samurai code!

^^nice...abit played but gud...

Flow is never on point .. its blunt like a rusted shank ..
& Kryo’s dick unlike ur clique .. is always uppin ranks!

^^^very gud punch and personal...liked alot

Even though u try .. you really are not funny ..
& we both get a dime a week .. but ures R from pocket money!

^^^ha ha ha...

I would swear u are the wackest .. but I don’t wanna mislead ..
A kid who is so dam soft .. he couldn’t even tame a pet peeve!

^^^not feelin this as much...but o.k

I’ll leave this bitch green .. make him realise he is shit ..
But I’ll give him some props .. to match his fake gangster tip!

^^^liked....gud punch

& its known all around .. that this bout u will lose it ..
coz Shabba is a bitch on the rag .. & I don’t mean Jamaican music!

^^^clever bar...original

Quotin a fool in ur sig .. probably just another lover ..
Ur desperate 2 stay true 2 white powder .. like ur crackwhore mother!

^^^good personal n funny punch...very gud bar

Your only 13 for fucks sake .. u wont evolve or get hot ..
& ur face wud have more crosses than Christians .. if X marks the spot!

^^^gud solid punch for finisher...

overall- tight verse not ya best but still gud...some funny shit and gud personals..


Apo is considered sick, well Im the elixir...
Ill take this bitch down faster than he did to his picture...

^^^ha ha ha

Thinkin he gully..man Im ashamed of this wack bitch...
Watchin them new pornos is the only time he pack clips...

^^^not feelin this....abit played.....came off o.k tho

Talks about ghostin for ppl...wut was he thinkin...
When in every war, US was the ones helpin weak ass England...

^^^personal but no real punch there

Pop the top off ya temple..and leave ya brains on the floor...
Man you suck so bad, i think its you that made it illegal to whore...

^^^clever....liked this

You the champ...thats why they say RV is sad...
I mean, your name now is the best wordplay youve ever had...

^^^gud personal...liked

If he calls me wack, Im supposed to expose him right...?
Well he said id be champ...look at all the mags he writes...

^^^quite gud personal but not much of a punch...but gud

Kid your not goin nowhere...your standin still...
Ill leave ya lights out like forgettin to pay ya electric bill...

^^^didnt really like this....

You take my title, ill take ya life...
You didnt end my text career, but my soulclaps will make me lift a mike...

^^^gud personal...clever bar....liked

Overall- tight verse, best i've seen off you for awhile but there was i thought a few to many filler bars in there which i wasn't really feelin...but gud shit...

vote - poppa kaps.....just had harder punches


peace
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