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Old 08-22-04, 02:12 PM   #6
Abraxas
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Voted For: Wreckage

Wreckage: your lines are steched as fuck you shud have done rewording or make it smaller in lenth but you got ok but weak pucnhes and personals you need to work on struvture and flow
Eyvon: yours was just all basic and some werer iight but basicly your was kinda wack

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