New Jack
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IP:
Abstrakt- Your concept was nicccceee, I was feelin it. Good rhyme scheme, vocab, flow, you had a really good overall verse.
Babylon- Your verse was good too, you had an alright concept, the ending was maaaaaaad predictable though. The verse had alot of detail, witch i thought was good. Your rhyme scheme could've been better, you made up for it with vocab, but still, rhyme scheme's important.
Overall I think whoever orginized the matchups shouldn't of matched these two together, seeing that these were the 2 best verse's I've read in the tourny so far, one of them shouldn't be knocked out of the tourny first round. Still, there has to be a winner so...
V/ Abstrakt
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