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Old 08-22-04, 07:13 PM   #18
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse

o.... my... gosh!!!

Can u say MERKED? Verbal smashed this kid in everyway possible. punches were harder... flow was better... liked the vocab a lot... had some multiples... not too complex but multi's none-the-less... nice read 7/10

$... I don't know man... momma jokes are played and ya started off with one... ya flow was just too simple to compete... gun talk ain't gangsta... everyone has one and everyone talks about it... try using a little more originality... liked the wordplay in the first line of the last bar but it wasn't a good finisher... 5/10
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