This was a nice battle,both came good,but Direkt left e-Dub trailing.E-dubs lines were way yoo long,you don't need a millon fillers to lead up to a punch,that kills the punch,thats most likely why his punches didn't hit too hard.
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E-Dubsu wanna holla back at dub lookin to put another name in ur rip-list..even thou u got da right name, u still couldnt hit dis..my adrenaline rush to rip ur ass is like a maddens blitz shyt/
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see too many fillers.it totlally killed the punch,you also had some multies,but with the length of the lines it also killed the affects of them.
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Direkt-threat
Spittin in V.V.V, no one wants to 'Battle this Vet'...
I'll give you 'Bank Account' for a 'Reality Check'...
Your not 'Hanging' in my direction, about to 'Make you Fall'...
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See,these punches are right to the point,they aren't load with a bunch of fillers and smooth nicely.Their is also lots of multies,which with direct punches,makes it flow really smoothly.
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E-Dub
lace pilots in ur skull and leave'ya metal plated in da brain..or i might do a quickie, duck-tape'ya mouth and inject anti-freeze in ur veins/
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That was a good punch,just too many fillers
now look at Direkts
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Direkt-Threat
Direkt spits hot, it's gonna' be sad to 'See you Melt'...
Im relevant to 'Liquor', Direkt's just 'Bad for your Health'...
Everyone get's one shot, 'Don't Bother to Count the Chances'...
You Thinking about Water, you'll face the 'Concious'-Quenches'(Consequences)
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Look at all thw word play,flow,multies and how it is direct to the punches.Direkt-Threat came out better everywhere,flow,multies,metaphors,and punches.His verse was better overall.
vote=Direkt Threat