Voted For: Lyriclesolja
Lyris won this cuz.. i liked your punclines more ya know? more creative, your opener was nice also, the following bar was pretty good also, more content in your verse.. soldier, jus work on punchlines and set ups more, also try and use personals.. lyris you get my vote..
return favore right here plz.. thanx, heres the link.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144411