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Old 08-23-04, 02:13 AM   #24
~Sonofisis~
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Voted For: Trooper

Trooper had the whole nine.. better rhymes, stucture and punches.. the structure was flawless and the punches connected, intesify had a couple of stretched lines, not too bad, but you had more complex language also, better vocab, overall your verse hit harder..

returbn favor right here cuz, thx..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144411
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