Voted For: Empire
A Weak MC That Should Above All, Be Tired Of Livin
Only Time U'll Grasp 8 Strong "Barz" are on the Inside Of Prison
Now On He'll D/R me Instead, Coz He Knows I Got The Skill
U Already Have 700+ Posts? U Make More "Threads" Than Cotton Mills
^^^first bar was played, and secound isn't really a punch. not likin either.
If This Bitch Used The Hands Of Fate, He Still Cant Touch Me
^^this is the type of thing u needed except u didn't turn it into a wordplay punch.
empire-
You barely POST better p.m for VOTES from ya HOMIES
You #1 PAUSE.. im on the 50th floor you way below me(3
^^^very played, but a personal so not as bad.
7 and 0 listen ho im bout to wreck and blemish ya record here
Thats not HATE bow to the GREAT thats RESPECT YOU FEEL
^^^didn't get, but sounded like self glorifying so i didn't like.
Ya BARS never HARD like you spit from rooms thats PADDED
Look under ya NAME you LAME thats ya verbal STATUS(1
^^^decent first line, and decent personal secound
PREWRITE in this FIGHT you need IT ALL TO HELP
''SON'' you REAL EASY BELIEVE ME look what you CALL YASELF
^^^personal attempt decent
since empire had a few decent things he gets my vote.
but both ya'll need to work on ya wording and (set ups) for punches, like actually have them. cuz if one of u had one nice punch that hit hard i woulda gave it to ya.
honest vote here. so return wit an honest one on this...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143415