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Old 08-23-04, 08:11 AM   #13
aberrant
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Voted For: upfront

Not a great battle but upfront easily takes it. Certifiedthugs verse was weak as hell. Needs elevating ALOT. Try splittin ya lines up and shit. Upfront, your verse was alright but could use some elevatin in vocab and creativity. Use some wit and murder him with a mix of funny n violent lines. Throw in some metaphors too.

v/ Upfront

Also could you please return the favour by voting fairly in my battle with Word Processor
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143304
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