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Old 08-23-04, 10:46 AM   #19
Kayem
illy fo' really
 
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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

This Battle was Mostly Made Up Of Wordplay And Metas no Real Personals But Imma Give This One To Drastic Coz Of His Better Use Of Vocab..........His Sructure Was A lil Off In Places But Didn't Effect Tha Flow......Lil Waynes Last Line Was A lil Stretched And Messed Tha Flow A Bit....... Still Had Sum Nice Wordplay/Punches But Thought Drastics Vocab And Punches Were Better.....Drastic ,Thought This Was One Of Your Better Lines:
you "winnin this battle is insane" like "Charles Mansons thoughts and brain, jus ill minded"//
Ill "turn you into eminem" by blastin you in the "dome wit peroxide", and leavin you wit "swelled head", and "idolized like stevie wonder" and "left temporarily blinded"//