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Old 08-23-04, 12:26 PM   #13
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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

close battle in the case that neither of u had wordplay or hard punches. so imma go basically on who looks more elevated sooo.... ya, he had better vocab and better metaphors, ya'll both need to really elevate on puches wit wordplay. a simple......
i leave u like kanye and make ya spit thru the wire.
this cat couldn't spit hot shit, sqoutin over a fire.
^^^thats a weak one from an older battle, but u get the idea. and if one of u had a wordplay punch like my secound line, u woulda got my vote str8 up.

u cant jus say what your doin... like
u wanna battle, lets do that shit
cuz im loadin up, my lyrical clip
....or what your ganna do to them

Ill "split your wig" then "divide" it among "mathematicians" who wanna become "professors"//
Ill "chop your body" into "traces of pieces", then "own you"...you "address" me as you "possessor”//

anyway taturials aren't over rated by any case. they'd explain it better than me.

anyway hit my battle up wit a honest vote.
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