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Old 08-23-04, 12:48 PM   #17
aberrant
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Voted For: Dopeness

vote: Dopeness

Nice personalwith the second bar, made me laugh lol. nice multi's, flow fell off in some places but on the whole it was aight. Some nice wordplay thrown in aswell. Nice verse man

sorry big tissle, you verse wasnt half bad. ok vocab and flow was better than Dopeness' but you lacked the creativity, the wit, the wordplay. Just be a bit more creative and you'll do well

Please return the favour by voting fairly in my battle with Word Processor

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143304
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