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Old 08-23-04, 02:14 PM   #13
~Luciano~
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~times-up like jadakiss, over like lil flip~
~and like a preview of a movie, you'll get-a-clip~
5/10
~flippin-ya-lip too much, leave you wit cuts-and-gash~
~sluts-get-smashed, stuck like immature gurls shaving they mustache~
6/10
~run for the hills, when that fuckin banana-spew~
~like mad cow desease, this is a piece of beef you dont wanna-chew~
5/10
~it's about time i silence you and leave you confined~
~man you couldnt wreck mics if you took the whole demolition team when you rhymed~
5/10
~show you the definition-of-pain, let these punches poisen and manifest~
~ill be damned if you rest, cause im leave you smokin like canibus~
6/10
~and-a-fist in ya nose, cause bitch i got the scariest-visions~
~leave ya rhymes watered down like i sprayed ya raps wit various-liquids~
6/10
~these is real statements, engraving ya face wit ailments~
~no stail-mates, like the old testament i destroy ya pages~
~i dont need no canvass, im real to paint-on~
~even if jesus is ya homeboy like teenage millionaire, ill have ya head off like saint-john~
5/10

yo faggot lets get somethin straight I AM NOT THE ONE TO PROVOKE//
after im done with chu, ruff tuff thug's homo dick ride'll be ya lone vote//
6/10
i portray greatness, u on the other hand just rely on subliminal things//
get blown to smitherines ya linez culdnt cut me if i took a nap on a gullotine//
7/10
i new u was puss, these bars snuff one of ya nine leave yu with eight//
i spotted ya tendancies lookin around for another man to help you procreate//
7/10
nigga weak bars are only gonna get herbs on here to dick ryde an model yu//
n'stead of absorbin it n her puss ya momz shulda just swallowed yu//
6/10
i can tell by ya linez u one of dem catholics that extort sinz by fuckin men//
well shit don a priest colla fuck a kid to some r. kelly an u'd fit right in//
6/10
these niggaz on here got ya head hype thinkin ya flow is the shit//
but all you get from me iz boo'z like william hung in front of an appolo audience//
5/10
but im done with chu caz its clear in my mind that u a bitch to me//
i culd dress like osama an u culd b bush an u still wuldnt want "war" wit me//
6/10

This battle was kinda weak the punches were there but they didnt hit that hard and the wordplay here was really one sides Deliquint u can use a little elevation and also some more complexity nice structure by both of u but it came down 2 the harder punch and better wordplay my vote ~~~Mic~~~~
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