Voted For: ProVerse

Proverse takes this battle. Good punches on his side. Zims punches seemed weak because they were so simple. Short lines too, nothin really intersesting. Proverse had hard punches and a good structure and flow. Try ta take those explanations out and put it at the bottom though. It makes the verse look better to the reader. No hate, but Proverse takes this one.

Vote-Proverse

Honest Vote:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=144250

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