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Old 08-23-04, 05:06 PM   #17
Kawn Flixx
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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

ok now THIS is a onesided battle

sinn: VERy
basic rhyme scheme
bars were very short
self glory as a opener
very very terrible verse
ok structure
Drastic:
strcu wasnt that good
punches were nice
flow was iight
good rhye sceme

vote/Drastic

ps: battle more experienced ppl lol
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