iight no doubt-- you just gotta pick up on ur delivery here try and keep your words a little more fluent, it sounds kinda like your readin- As far as your voice goes its workin, the beat needed a beat here i kinda felt like it was one giant intro until alicia dropped in with the beat, but you kept a tempo with your flow as far as bar length not swayin around too much- Quality wasn't bad I think the only thing I really didn't like was the lack of a bass line and the way if flipped from verse to chorus... it was a little choppy there... keep on doing ur thing though we need more heads doin audio so we can all elevate

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