Voted For: Geuce

too many lines to do this line by line.. but nice topic regret.. and before i critique this both drops were really, really good... good job.. hope nobody sleeps on this..
okay critiquin'..
~opener:
Strive for perfection and when failure hits it's tragic...
But we try to prevent such flaws with certain gadgets...
Creating alias after alias.. cheating their way to fame...
Deep down they subside the ultimate feeling of shame...
^very nice L.I. u took that category, nice..

~closing:
Showing that there’s more than meets the eye, revealing all the portions of closet space.
Out of the closet shows Evil’s grin and every design of hate.
Then regretting we will be, since there won’t be nothing else to hide.
Realizing that we had unlimited chances that ended at the stop of time.
^very good way to end ur topic with time being a factor.. really nice..
~Image-wise: Guece, produced a good focus but still stickin' to the topic regret.. the "Jesus Saves" commercial was very creative..
~Word-Usage: Guece again.. the way u used ur words was really nice and feel into play with the topic very well.. "gift of breath", "whirlwinds of flurry".. very intelligent.. nice..
L.I. was very good too; i liked the way you produces lil' segments of multis, for example:
Discover a dark track of paths emcees refer to as biting...
Disgust within themselves like why bother writing?...
Hide the truth behind the walls.. slowly though they're caving in...
They struggle to find line after line.. but still are craving wins...
^last two lines, very creative and stickin' to ur version of regret relatin' to emcees..
It was a very hard decision for me, honestly but.. the use of words was a good effect for Guece which gave him the win, no hate towards L.I. cuz ur shit was tight too...
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hit my links up, ppl hope i can see a rematch or sumthin' between u two.. so that's word.. good luck with this.!
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