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Old 08-23-04, 07:55 PM   #28
G Deuce
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

Ight, coo battle but this is how it goes, play by play style...

Addin’ a loss to yah record sorry bout that honey…
But you smaller then the faces on throwback money…
7/10 - Punch was ok but not good for an opener

You “softer” then the “fabric” aftah I use “snuggles”…
Got you more “tricked” then “magic” preformed on “muggles”…
8/10 - Good punch but the snuggles line wasn't good

You the discredited “Heavens Angel” merkin you like Yahtzee…
Got you more unholy then a “Jew” turned tah “Nazi”…
9/10 Real tight punch and hardhitting

If you “next to my death bed” then you must be homeless…
And when the punches hit yah face you left domeless…
7/10 - You sit it up with a tight beginning, but punch wasn't hard hitting

Like followers tah Buddha my shots praise at yah temples…
Hot shellz to the face leave more then just dimples…
8/10 Really good stable punch

No need to be strategic with yah like we playin chess…
I jump you like checkers keyin punches to tha face that avoid the chest…
7/10 Punch was stretched; to avoid that, try using metaphors to shorten it down

You couldn’t be on top of the “hill” if you were “cypress”…
Should’ve given you a verbal warning, Don’t try this…
7/10 - Once again, set up was good but not hard hitting

You claim Lady Fiya my “river” will dowse yah flame…
For now on you just lady I took the fiya out yah name…
9/10 Really good punch and use of metas

Should’ve “aborted” when you had the chance I took your “right tah choose”…
Like George Bush tah Al Gore in this battle I win and you lose…
6/10 Probably the worst line in your spit, punch was soft

have you shook like when cops follow an excon...
real bitches battle, ladies where aprons...
7/10 Ok closer, lack good punch
total = 85 %


this nigga “misses DaTruth”, lost his manhood wantin’ respect?! (sig)*
annoyin’ reject, nigga u just anotha Bentley tryna fit in every set! lol
9/10 Hahahaha, funny punchline and good opener

iNC addict saw Lloyd “roll dice”, now you mimic his left hand! (jag off)
battle result: his body sparkin’ ashes near empty propane cans!
9/10 Really good punch and use of rhymes with metas

run to his sig, WiNC asking Jadakiss “why” rapping’s not ur gift?!
b4 u was just “GAYE”, now you too quick to kiss to my “grits”?!
7/10 - OK line, punchline but needed to word the opener

real niggas scratch not wink, “sword-fightin” since u were eight! (dick)
rhymes can’t be taken to “heart” if ya drove at mine with “stakes”!
9/10 Unbelievable use of rhymes and metas again

feather-weight?! his ‘ass’ ‘WiNC’ cuz he lets them dicks ‘grasp it’..
beat ya ass n stray jackets, u mo’ crushed than hopeless romantics! lol
8/10 - Good stable spit punch

you fuckin’ wit’ a frantic; Fiya left his grill in sets of chipped teeth..
toss this can-opener back in the drawer, you made ya fans fall asleep! lmao
8/10 Really good punch

while ya plead, Fiya release ya blood from jagged holes n ya temple!
vitals (u) drop pitiful, he claim “beatin” never “crosses” his “mental”->
7/10 Ok punch, just try re-wording it

like “exorcist” u elevatin a “bent spine“, this “cripple” gets propped up! (d/r)
doctor gave him a “sucker” he ‘came out’ limpin’ & a lil’ knocked up! lol
8/10 Hahahahahaha, real funny punch line

ya muscles too loose to stand, ashamed cuz ya location spelled out: FLaws**
rhymes gettin’ lost, ur audience still waitin’ for signals that say “applause”! lmfao
7/10 Ok closer, you already used the audience joke previously, dont try to repeat yourself next time
total = 92 %

Overall, very good spit by both, but you know what to work on...

v - LF
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