yeah its more like a spoken word piece, doesnt really fit with the beat. i know what you were trying to do. not sure how long youve been doing this dv, something that will help is just to know your rhyme forwards and backwards, so you can flip it on any track anyway. that will help your delivery. keep it up dog, keep spittin

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