u could of did better....
creativeness was average...
slickness wasnt great...
flow was ok
topic was decent...
but come more creative and add a twist in ya story that wouldnt happen normally or what a normal spitter would say....

like dont make the killing sceen so plain make it crazy.....

5.0 keep trying...

peep my shit and drop feed back...

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