Thread: G vs Empire
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Old 08-23-04, 09:39 PM   #23
Traxik
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Voted For: G

I slice this his fat out of his face, make his appearance droopy,
cuz “Empire”s verse ‘bombs’, and is pointless like Fat Joe’s movie
8/10 good opener, and good personal maybe

This real simple black and white like old ass movies
You couldnt stall on my verse if you was a broke ass hoopty
hmmm kinda same rhyme scheme and i have no idea what a hoopty is 5/10

Crack him like an egg, flip him, and make him fry snappy,
Stab him, and piss on his corpse…so he can “die-nasty”.
this is a good closer with a decent personal on the last line 8/10

Uneffective punches couldnt hold weight if you write in a gym
Ya shit need too elevate you like a kite with no wind
not a good closer at all, the shit dont even rhyme unles you pronounce gym like gime, but yeh 4/10

overall G took this with better wordplay and makin me laugh a bit
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