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Old 08-23-04, 09:43 PM   #2
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Voted For: Geuce

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murder you casually there's no need to be formal
his rhyme's aren't "build" in "strength" their "ab"normal
6/10
blah like black eyed peas lets get this shit started
leave in fashion voice "eckos" because im the "target"
5/10
this kid can flow...if he learns how to even pee
give this fake a house so he can learn how to key
5/10
Pot Smoker's alliance you think you really dope?
you ain't meant for spotlight I cant see u with scope
4/10
leave the site like Polifick, or get banned like Prolicx
before you die you see the ring...you watched the olympics
5/10


When I’m speaking combustible lines, untouchable rhymes that rape men
Lyrically defined as who rip the mind of For$aken
6/10
Atomic Reac –Tons of metaphors that rattle pores
Odds are stacked; you won’t “survive this battle”, nor “win the war”
6/10
Cause I will severely sever every gene that “claims”, but “utters deceit”
He’s “Artificially” enhanced, but programmed not to spit, but utter defeat (A.I.)
6/10
You’re a machine, but neither one of us is human, a lyrical fact (The Grim Reaper)
Cause even machines made of metal can be turned to “piles of scrapes”
5/20
The creator of death can’t be destroyed by lies or “inanimate” things
So give it a rest, The Reaper just descended the rise of the machines
6/10



Came down 2 overall harder punches and better wordplay this was an ok battle but in my eyes Deuce had better wordplay and a better stucture more complexity and his punches werent forced seemed liked they came natural and had a nice string to them
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