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Old 08-24-04, 02:31 AM   #15
M&rk
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Voted For: WildFire

don't worry kid, I'll call your parents your friend, and your crew/
let them know you got torched, and theres nothin left of you
^^^bowl shit to end with a self gloryfing bar.

I'll leave you on the edge of life, but I'll keep you from dyin/
I'm like a country with no judicial system, Bitch i'm not tryin/
^^^liked this meta, but u shoulda used it as a punch towards him. ya umm..... u definately shoulda done that.

Verbal abuse is, very confusin, because this cats verse is offerin sedation/
this herb doesn't speak ill verbs too well, it's like he's "lost in translation"/
^^^your one correct wordplay punch. wins u the battle

verbal abuse-
Started off well, but then again Fires always fastest to bust.
Laugh if you must, wut more can i say when my opponents just ashes n dust?
^^^coulda hit harder with this.

the rest i didn't like at all. u gotta have wordplay punches or better disrespecting personals to win battles.

return wit an honest vote
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143415

even if i didn't vote for u, please. i aint hatin jus bein honest. now tell me what u think wit my battle.
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