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Old 08-24-04, 03:41 PM   #14
Reflect
The Next Level
 
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Voted For: krazy

nice verse krazy, you had your structure worked out well in this, i felt you came with harder punches as well. you used some nice word play in that as well.

drastic, your verse was also good, had some nice punches, but i felt your structure wa a bit off, your lines were all the startin of new topic, and you did way more than 10 lines anyway !

v/ krazy