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Old 08-24-04, 04:23 PM   #5
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Influence
yo you think i can join im good and im elevating all the time i got 1 battles out n im winning dat...

verse.

im influential, ive got fundamentles of this rap game,
my names unique im influencing you just by the name,
katastrophe koncepts or in other words k.k or k,
thats the ku klux klan, chop you up, blood sprayed,
no lines played, punches wide ranged now i say,
let me be in your crew i wont let you down,
ill be the best mc ever i can wear the crown,

ok what you think? holla back


Positive Feedback
-Good Structure
-Alright Word Play
- Nice Use Of Multies
- Straight Vocabulary

Positive Critisism
-Flow Was A Bit Shaggy
-Could Have Came With More Effort
-Evaluate And Bring Something To The Plate Next Time

I Say "No" To Being In The Crew:

Your Verse Didn't Do For Me.. It Was Weak.. Some Of Your Lines Were Played Out... Or Didn't Fit Where They Were Located..

Check Back!
-Good Luck!!!
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