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Originally Posted by Jerseyz Champ
Im a Desire i make u wanna hire me put me in da crew
Im gon show u some hot punchlines so u can tel influence is new
imma make u see it and sleep read it and weep got somthn 2 say'
My punches hit hard son not weak cuz ur reacton to it is u juzz gon Lay
sHit lemmie stop theese stretched ass lines now
U gon make this wow wit that son How
When i heard better punchlines from a mudda fukin Cow
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-First Off I Think You Over-Done-Screw-Yourself! (lol)
^Nothing Personal!
-Second Off I Can't Read Half Of The Shit You Done Typed Out Because Of All The 'Spelling Errors' Perhaps? (Work On That)
-You Have Some What Of Word Play.. But Not Much!! (Work On That)
-My Punches Hit Hard Not Weak - Stick To The Facts.. Don't Lay Nothing Out there That Isnt 'True' lol Not When You Are Trying Out Anyways! (Work On That)
-And Your Ending Was Just Plain (Whack) .. But That Would Be Even An Understatement!!! .. Beyond Whack!!!!
I Say 'No' To Being In The Crew ...
PayCe!
-And Good Luck!