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Old 08-24-04, 08:17 PM   #26
Abraxas
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Voted For: G

this is a very good abttle that was close
G: you have good strong personals and you punches were good and some lines i found funny you had good wordplay but ya structre was kindaa messed and so was ya flow but your was good

Snono: your shit was good and made it competitive , you have nice punches and ok p epersonals and ya flow ans strcutre was iight but some of your lines were3 a lil not as good

vote G for a lil better verse
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