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Old 07-04-02, 02:32 PM   #2
G. Buttersworth
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Dub's verse

i can rip a body built vortex...into a robitic antarex... and guess what, (what) ur nex...killing u with translated typed text...
{ Dogs nice fuckin rhyme scheme vocab was on point this is a hot bar right here }

and ur autopsy pics gone be on da net, but just ur spinal cord/
{ nice lil personal}

u spitting like u a legendary pac...u couldnt get a sign, if u stacked 3 mil on ur under-ground album dropp
{nice lil personal}

...
gay pals....bust open ur ass-crack and leave'ya broke with no stylez...send'ya back to ur click with a coke but no smile...
{decent personal}

...how many shells u get all depends on da numbers i rolls on da dice......
and i'm telling u man, da digits dont look nice/
{think u could of ended this more effectivly but i like the begining of this punch}


B.Styles' verse

-dub you gettin downed quick like twenty dollar extacy pillz/
Ya gotta mil stylez, well outta twenty mil I emerged wit tha ill

{Nice intro}

Face it your stylez only raw when bitten, an you bring raw steal
{ nice fukkin punch there broke i felt that 1...had to really read over to get it}

Young Desperado's? ya sound like a flamin click of travlin slutz
{hahaha nice personal}

Drop knowlege on broke? You so easy to find cause you sit at home an stroke
{ decent personal}



nice fuckkin battle ya'll i actually enjoyed voting for this
but only one will remain victorious
and my vote goes to E-Dub
i felt the multi and the flow and the personalswere thought out better
Broke that verse was defintly tight but you lost me in a couple of bar here and there
thats why my vote is E-Dub
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