Thread: psylense vs loc
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Old 07-04-02, 02:53 PM   #12
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Psylence's Verse

come at psy wit ya hardest? someone pass a kleenex this cats punches are like tissues no wonda you labelled REJECT,

{ this was an ight intro }

ill slap you correct ya best expect me to cum hard like im erect,
{nice lil bar simple but effective}

I put fractures in locs lip causing him to spit with a lisp,
{ lol hahaha nice personal here}

you want a punch line ill rip my hand off my wrist and throw my fist,
{this was an ight punch.. could of thought about it more}

ill haunt you like superstitions with this rendition of a crash collision of fiber-optiks in ya vision,
{nice fuckin rhyme scheme and vocab.. well thought out bar}

so swallow this dick kiss my fist and taste the piss
{didn't really like this finisher but hey nice verse}


L.O.C's verse

Even if Psy wrote with a pen full of FECES his verse still wouldn't be tha SHIT,/
Cuz Im like a WILDFIRE in tha DROUGHT SEASON...Ain't no stoppin me once Im LIT,/

{Nice lil Intro not very complex but defintly effective}

Im bringin heat ta this battle like ERIC & DYLAN back at COLUMBINE,/
& even if this fool sold TABASCO laced COCAINE he still couldn't SLANG a HOT LINE,/
{nice personal and effective punchline to connect it...good shit}

And Psy U should change ur name to BLACK ROB since you like tossin them salads like WHOA!,/
{this gave me a chuckle... decent personal}

Cuz ur like an R-KELLY date...still YOUNG DUMB & FULL OF CUM,/
{would of been a hot punch but i swear i heard some of that bar before}

like a PENDULUM ur back door SWINGS BOTH WAYZ psylence,/
So SHHHHH!!! go to sleep while I KO you with no violence!!
{nice personal i think... finisher wasn't all that bad it was decent}

both of ya'll were swingin
i was feeling both punches and personals
both of ya'll verses were tight
but theres only one victor
so my vote goes to LOC FUNK
his verse flowed smoothly and his punches and personals were more well thought out

Psy nice flow but i felt you could of come harder than that
cuz the creativity is there but otherwise nice battle verse

VOTE= L O C Funk
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