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Old 08-24-04, 11:13 PM   #11
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Voted For: WORDPLAYA

ok jew good wordplay and vocab structure sucked no flow can be seen with those streched ass lines punches were ok no personals killed it for you alot of self glorification 4/10
wordplay i liked the holacaust line good personal once i caught the ender i saw that was dope real original there your structure also needs help but good flow once its caught your personals made this a good verse6/10
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