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Old 08-24-04, 11:44 PM   #13
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Voted For: RymheReaper

ok upfront whack self glorification weak punches and disses and all about how tough you are weak here ok flow a little off a3/10
rhyme good structure and flow nice vocab but try to rhyme the bigger words not the little ones it weakens your punches good diss at the end alot of people may not catch it a ok verse but better then your oppenants 4/10
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