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Old 08-25-04, 02:03 AM   #9
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Voted For: NewKid

new kid took this by a lil bit...he edged you with better punches and personals...a couple multies, and had good flow...structure was a lil off but good...imwhiteuredead...u need to elevate more...add more creativity...ure opener was weak, and your closer was just getting stronger...so vote goes to newkid...was just over all better
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