Kizza won this one cuz.. he had better structure, wordplay and punchlines.. I enjoyed yur verse more kizza, it was more bar for bar, while ice pick's verse was kinda everywhere, i mean the rhymes and vocab was nice, but the structure was off and the flow wasn't that tight.. kizza your flow was more steady and the punches landed harder so i vote for you..
return the favor and give us an honest vote in this battle cuz..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144250
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