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Old 08-25-04, 02:23 AM   #9
M&rk
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Voted For: creaTivitie

im known for brining mo ill bars then some sic black smiths`
fossil your rhymes now litterally your style is jurassic`
^^^first line played, secound weak but since its true its a nice personal.

carson-
see strait thru you...like cathedral mural's...
Bein in your crew..Im like a tiger wit squirell's
^^^wack, thats the dumbest metaphor i've seen.

I popped ur pimple...but infact was ur brain
Who u playin...Kid...you aint reppin Di Game-
^^1st line, sayin what u do to someone isn't a punch.
2nd, since when is dickriding di game a punch?

i gotta give it to creative for actually puttin his punches somewhat towards his apponet.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142281
^^^return wit an honest vote on this jazz, but notice how he only uses self gloryfiing lines and not any disses on me.

no hate, jus some honest shit, so return wit your constructive critisism
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