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Old 08-25-04, 02:32 AM   #9
~Sonofisis~
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Voted For: String9487

Obvously you took this string..

structure - string
punches - string
personals - string
vocab - string
multies - string

overall - you had a way better verse string more entertaining and the punches were simple but hit hard, your rhymes were on poinmt also.. daking needs to work on the structure really bad and needs to elevate, so vote = string

return favor with an honest vote right here..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144250
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