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This is a very nice topic...I am not going to say it was extremely good nor that it was extremely bad -- just because everyone has room to elevate.
I like how it didnt rhyme...I felt that gave it alot of emotion and more depth...you might of been able to use different words that would give more depth. By doing that, it wouldn't be changing the meaning of the poem, it would just change the tone...possibly give it a more meaningful effect...
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