I feel ya pain, yo... and I agree... a little more creativity matching the emotion and it would be a sick drop... ya started off really good and then ya ideas started getting smaller... emotion was still there but the "picture" was starting to get a little blurry if ya know what i mean... nice though... keep at it... also... check my drop called That's All I Can Stand.... I Can't Stands No More"... it's in the same frame of emotion as your piece... lemme know what you think...one