Yo Armageddon, i aint meaning to hate, but this is one of your worst pieces ive seen, you can come a lot iller than this dogg. This wasnt simple wordplay in the least and it was flowing aight but when i first came to this site...i peeped some of your shit and it was madd crazy, a hell of a lot better than this... I remember this first line from that shit i read of yours going "Another day on earth the lord failed to putr me in a hearse" That was some tight shit, this isnt the stuff im used to seeing you spit.
Like i said though, this piece wasnt wack, it prolly beats of 1/3rd of the talent on Open Mic, there's no hate on you from my part, i just know this aint your best shit, you can do better.
Nice overall though, keep at it son...