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Old 08-25-04, 05:12 AM   #12
Terumoto
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Gangstar: nice drop. stayed on topic... flow was aight, cept a lil choppy n im not feelin them triple stanzas.... vocab was a lil under par, but it was good.

Poet: vocab was way ahead of gangstar's.... So with it you could make the plot flow way better... Good story n ending, nice set up. Good shit.
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