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Old 08-25-04, 09:29 AM   #7
aberrant
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From: Nottingham, England
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Voted For: jewpride

my vote goes to jewpride

N.E.T- It was a decent verse but ya rhymes seemed to fall off a lil for me. Some decent punches but could be elevated and made better. Decent flow and a little bit of wordplay but not enough. ITs was an ok verse though

Jewpride- Another ok verse. Structures wank, sort that shit out but your multi's and punches made up for that. Flow was aight too. Just change your structure and your verse will flow better. My vote goes to you for the multi's and a few stronger punches

very close battle, good dstuff

Please return the favour by voting fairly in my battle (i took the time out to vote, you should too)

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143304

thanx...
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