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Old 08-25-04, 09:53 AM   #12
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
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Voted For: NewKid

new kid took this easy
better punches metas were good too
needs to work on flow and structure to make it easier to read
white.. ur verse was not potent enough, weak personals and punches, good flow and structure
weak metas too simple.
win to newkid...... no hate just honesty
BUT if u want to white we can battle next if u can handle it
pm me or matterfact ill set the thread u can accept or decline