Ah'ight dawg you always hit my shit up so it only seemed right to do the same for you, ah'ight your flow was decent you missed the snare a couple times during the track but it was decent, your biggest problem was your delivery....you lacked emotion and you sounded like you was reading, in my opinion dats a hype beat so you should have been hyped almost angry sounding on it, also some of your lines u would pause to make it fit in the bar I suggest putting a filler word in there like "the or and" it makes a difference, also try memorizing ya lyrics makes it so much easier to flow, and try standing when you spit it will force u to spit from ya diaphram..."comes out better", overall I'll give this a 7/10, keep recording and you'll be 10/10 in no time

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